very interesting, I loved some of the images and rhymes you use. Also, I like how you have two different speakers in the poem. great work, hope to see more.

no one cares about me. but i really don't care. I hate all people anyway.

What are they digging? For gold, oil, or to bury something...or somebody? Wow, I really need to stop watching TV.

I love the way your poetry flows. It really sounds good when you read it. Like something out of Dr. Suess, albiet Dr. Suess doesn't really write about abusive/cruel parents. Two lines I want to point out though are:

"You call us your sons but your kin we am not" I think you meant 'are not'

"A brass ring, glass bead or penny" I lost my flow on this one. The number of syllables is a little off and it disrupts the...well flow (I keep using that word lol). Try changing it to A single brass ring, glass bead or penny. Or something like that. The two added syllables sounded better when I read it that way. Anyway, like I said, love your poetry. Great flow! Hahaha, I need a thesarus. ~Krys

First off, I want to thank you for the review that you left me on my untitled poem. It made my day brighten up a bit.

I really like this. It flows nicely and it really hits home with me. Wonderful poem. And the beat is really good.

I love this. GREAT JOB! Keep it up and never quit. That's all I can say... GREAT JOB!