As usual, good job! I loved the message, and the execution. =D

wow, i really like this. the magic as a returning theme is wonderful. i especially like the line "but we both would break before we'd bend". keep it up.

Oh, how beautiful and heartwrenching.

I LOVE the first stanza, it's exquisite. It set the mood for the rest of the poem. I also adore the fourth stanza...it's so sad..."So you came to me and you lied/Just so I could feel the magic". My heart goes out to the narrator...it's heartbreaking how the thing dearest to her was taken away.

I think the poem would be even better if you could edit a few lines...

I think a comma should be added after the "so" in "So never able to make amends" for more grammatical sense..

And in "That day my heart crushed in your hands", you could add a "was" after "heart", for the above reason.

"I saw you, her, and our forgotten magic" Really moving. The metaphor works well here. Good job, keep writing!

I REALLY REALLY like this a lot. I can relate to some of it, and it's just a really well written poem. :) Love it