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| Hope.And.What.Not 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusewhat is she/he trying to reach? I liek the title reach. True Calling |
| MonsterGirl 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abusewhat you trying to reach for? o.O thts the only thing tht confused me (lol) but then again I get confused easily =P anyways its a good poem |
| M.J. Perales 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's an interesting plot. What are you reaching for? Maybe you meant the last line to mean failure... but if you add a space between the poem and the last line, the narrator could be hanging him/herself then the last line could mean the person is dead, buried. Interesting thoughts. Maybe your screen name put me in that mode of thought. |