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| zoli and the pandasocks 2006-12-02 ch 1,   | First, thanks for stopping by and reviewing! I'm sorry it took so long to return the favour, but I've been off FictionPress for a while. The title was what caught my eye first, but the poem was equally stunning. I loved your use of metaphore and description - I could really paint the image in my mind and Benthi's anger actually scared me somewhat. Great job overall! |
| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-07-10 ch 1, | You're going against Rule #41 of "What Makes Poetry Good" by Me. That rule is: don't make up words. But really, this poem is GREAT. Love it. Making up words works here because you know you're doing it and you succeed in almost parodizing 'Alice in Wonderland'. As for what the poem means. Well. Something about a storm? Or, on a literary level, something about the sin of mankind coming to consume humanity, but eventually being overwhelmed by its astonishing and hidden virtue? I have no idea what the hell I'm talking about. Probably nothing. J |
| UnfilteredWater 2006-07-09 ch 1, | Such an awesome poem! Now about the review you left on "Every Step" First off: Thank you kindly for the review and I loved your feedback, you were (Snaps fingers) That close to cracking the meaning behind it! Second off: The chorus would have to be, as most people know, the part of a song where they repeat it over and over again, but the chorus, is where I wrote the word in paratheses and it ends in the "You're the Face that gets..." I hope I cleared that up for ya, |
| Deavon Brooks 2006-06-02 ch 1, | i can see how this is similar to jabberwocky. good poem.. and thanks for the review. im sorry if you didnt understand it. i guess the message is subtle. the poem is basically about this person who complicates his life. its probably directed at them personaly, which is why you probably didnt get it. soo.. maybe i should revise it... thanks :)!! |
| chocohound 2006-05-25 ch 1, | I loved this poem! I love most nonsense poems (the well-writen one anyway...) I think it really shows talent if you can write a flowing, well-written, well-liked nonsense poem! It may not seem like much, but it's harder than it looks! Great, great, great! |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-23 ch 1, | "the river they grabe" - sounds a lot like carrol's "outgrabe"...XDD Absolutely delightful nonesense poetry. Never tried to write one myself but I'm a big fan of them. Congratulations on a job well done. |