Reviews for The Merchant's Daughter

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Red Crown 2008-07-04 ch 1,	abuseThat was quite entertaining. The only thing I had a problem with was that there was no description of the character's physical features. Other than that, I must say that your first chapter was rather well.
superheroesarereal 2008-07-02 ch 12,	abuseyou cheeseball. i love you almost as much as i love the cookies we made. ^_^
writtenwordsaremagic 2008-06-21 ch 11,	abuseYour story has been entertaining/lovely right down to the end. I can't wait to see what will happen next--especially Mr. Hammond's fate! Hope you'll post soon! ;) Merry
writtenwordsaremagic 2008-06-20 ch 4,	abuseYou write so beautifully. I know everyone has a different voice (in writing) but yours differed from the normal. It goes well with the period you are dealing with. Also, I am looking forward to find out whether the Rose Boy will have any significance in Jeanine's later life. Happy Writing Merry
Michelle Habibi 2008-06-14 ch 11,	abuseNO!! not a cliffhanger! It was getting to the best part!
Audie Scott 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseYes, very good, I should think. This was written in a simple enough language, but kept me reading nonetheless. The human emotions are displayed well, and the characters themselves seem interesting, though I will have to read more to know them better. I am a fan of 18th and 19th century England myself, and master these elegant person's behaviour and manner as accurately as I possibly can after reading countless books written in those times. At the end of most my reviews, I sum up what I have said. In short; very good, and expect more reviews from me =) Audie
superheroesarereal 2008-05-18 ch 10,	abusewell i like it =)
koel18 2008-05-10 ch 4,	abuseThis is so beautiful! The childish jealousy,Jeanie's and Jorie's respective personalities, Mrs. "Cathy" and her daughter- all of these are portrayed so compellingly that I am lost for words. Best chapter yet!
koel18 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseYou are a pretty good writer, you know.:) Loved everything-your characterisations, the dialogue(which is not as formal as I'd expect it to be,yet doesn't seem jokey or out of place.) Though I thought the last paragraph was not snappy enough compared to the rest of your writing... Anyhow, me likes! runs to read more
LeenaElle 2008-05-08 ch 10,	abuseWsheew, you weren't lyin about this being a long chapter! I felt like it was dragging a little bit toward the middle of the chapter, but a lot of the things you brought up seemed important to the grand scheme of the story. I am looking forward to what is coming next, and I hope you won't make us wait quite as long!
superheroesarereal 2008-01-19 ch 9,	abuselove i liked it awesome face...there were some typos, but overall it was good. "She did not know, however, that Jack had hoped that she would come, for he hadn’t talked to her for an extended span of time, and he wished to make amends by conversing with her alone, in private."- that sentence is sort of awkwardly constructed ( i know its not a run-on, im not tony) "You and your innocence gaze."- i think it should be innocent and there was one mre where you put he said he said and i can't find it... good though...i'm glad you decided to write again =)
LeenaElle 2008-01-09 ch 9,	abuseVery interesting chapter. It has been a long time since you've updated, and I wish I had the time to go back and read some of your older chapters, because I forget what has happened in the past, I have a vauge recollection, but it's been a while. Anyway, this was an interesting chapter like I said, I'm confused about both Jack and Gerards' regard for Jeanie. I hope your next update will come sooner than this one did, because I am very curious to find out what happens next.
euphorictragedy 2008-01-08 ch 9,	abuseI really like this story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! So please update soon!
superheroesarereal 2007-10-18 ch 8,	abuseI waited for this chapter and I was up until like 3:30 instead of like 3 because I wanted to see what happened. I heart you and your awesome face writing LOVE FACE...the only thing I noticed was that it should be "ladies' man" not lady's man...AND I thought the Allan Royce guy didn't like her because she lied? I think I'm just not paying close attention...-_- but ANYWHOO I love it because I love you.
LeenaElle 2007-10-16 ch 8,	abuseGood line to end on! I'm totally confused, sorry to say. You're authors note at the beginning of the chapter, and then the happenings of the chapter have me absolutely befuddled, not to mention your chapter summary!! First of all, if Jeanie is secretly in love with Jack, who you've said is going to be the one she hunts down, then you've got to start showing a little more interaction between the two of them, because at this point in the story I would be very surprised to see her love him. Purely because they never interact. Secondly, I don't know what is going on with this Hammond guy...but I think he could be a major player in the story, to the point where I could see someone falling in love with someone else there...hm. And finally, this Alan Royce thing has me absolutely bewildered! I have no idea what's going on! I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not, but it does make me want to keep reading! I just hope my confusion is cleared up sometime soon! Keep up the good work, I anxiously look forward to your next update :)

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