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| Sarah 2008-06-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseZachary is really starting to grind on my nerves right now. But honestly, you are doing a great job with the story, although the storyline is still slightly blurry, and you still haven't updated after more than a year! ;( But honestly, you are one of my favourite authors on this website and I love your stories |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-04-30 ch 5, | abuseaw update please! |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-28 ch 5, | abuseZachary is really getting on my nerves! I wish i could be part of Team BS. All hail Morgan. Are you planning on having anything between Morgan And Kyle or Morgan and Zach? Because at times its like she's insanely attracted to him..anyway can you please updat soon! i want tht saboatage!! =] |
| Michelle 2008-04-13 ch 5, anon. | abusei love your story. How come you haven't updated it in a year? Yoiu should update it. |
| thinkTwice Nfall 2008-01-23 ch 5, | abuseAWESOME START! I personally like how you're easing into the story even if some of your other readers don't. So many stories jump right into the action, so it's nice for a bit of change. Plus, it helps build up the suspense, right? (Not the mention the character-building thing.) I hope your story continues to be as good as it is now. I read your series before this one, and I was disappointed with it. It started out strong like this one, but then the story about Shelley coaching the team turned into just Brandon and her bickering or Brandon trying to win her over. The whole football season was practically passed over except for the one or two chapters dedicated to their important games. - Pretty disappointing considering that even though it was supposed to be about Shelly being a coach, she wasn't shown as one much after the first maybe 5 or so chapters. You also showed less action and more dialogue, so it kind of took away some of the spark in the story. Anywho, I'll end my mini-lecture/rant/complain-train here. I love your writing, (because in spite of all of the things I didn't like about your story, you really do have talent) so keep doin' your best! I'll be waiting for your next update! :) |
| Sydney-J 14 2008-01-05 ch 5, | abusei know this is ireelevant im still reading chapter one (which by the way is ashocker that brandon and shelly broke up) but I love watching the search for the next pussycat doll but in england we just got up to the last five contestants left cant wait till the next ep on saturday |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-11-16 ch 5, | abusejust love your story...I hope to see Brandon and Shelly get together soon...I hope she dumps zachary...hope you update soon |
| books4me 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI read "For the Love of the Game" and am very happy to see a sequel. :D I look forward to reading more, * Books4mE * |
| Ki 2007-08-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseMorgan doesn't seem smart at all. In fact the tone of this entire story is pretty stupid. Not to say that it isn't amusing. It is. But please stop referring to Morgan's "abnormally high IQ", because everything she does and says negates that. |
| artistic dreamer 2007-08-03 ch 5, | abuseaagghh! please update soon! i so want to find out what happens, Shelley needs to forget the Zach guy no matter how hot he is! Brandon is so much better! omg! i can't wait til the next update! when's it gonna be? |
| saintsandsailors 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abusePLEASE UPDATE MORE!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. I am on team BS too! I really hope Morgan[even if by herself] gets Brandon and shelley back together! |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-06-16 ch 5, | abusee sequel! really hope brandon and shelley get together again.. soon! .. PS i watched the search for the next pussycat doll and was SO UPSET THAT ASIAN LOST! =( melissa R was so much better. you know her? =O i'm really jealous. she seemed like such a sweetheart =) |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-06-10 ch 5, | abuseheh heh update! please? anyways great stories, i'm sorry i wasn't bothered to review your old one. but i loved it! just a question though, can you write faster? hahah anyways i probably sound incredibly annoying by now so cya x |
| sussex 2007-06-07 ch 5, | abuseplease hurry with the updates... i cant wait for it... |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2007-06-02 ch 5, | abusei love it so far! i actually *shudder* squealed wen i found out! im really liking it. i ope u udate soon! please nd thank u! xD u kno melissa r. from the search of the next pussycaat doll? thats so kool! i wished she won instead! :D |