This made me laugh out loud - a beautiful poem about man's obsessive nature :) The language is tight, the repetitions effective, the only part I am not sure works is the very end, with all of the the with/withouts... it feels a little like a brain twister there :)

Good stuff. "pulling the earth under stretched claws" "a feather footed fool driving like hell has opened and only my Corvette can outrun Satan and all his State troopers all the way back to reality" Great writing.

Great images here; the idea of the Corvette, in particular. Reminds me of a Ginsberg-ish type or writing, flowing, accessible, thoroughly lacking in apology. All very raw.

Content-wise, the poem's very intriguiing. Wonderful!

Nice one, Bronzeage

Funny how I've never driven it and now I can imagine exactly what it feels like