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| an-entraced-pyromaniac 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseo...k |
| Der Patrizier 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is very abstract! My imagery reminds me of some fantasy or science fiction film,lol. Nice one. I like the desc riptions of pain you've got here. |
| nadorj 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI really love this poem I think its your best yet you are fantastic at ryming I couldnt ryme in a poem if my life depended on it well great job and keep up the good work! |
| Karma.Rose 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abusehey, it's me again. i'm sure your perfectly aware of what i'm going to say =]. vivid. beautiful. not one bit rushed, and very enjoyed! keep up the good work! stella. xx. |
| alice is dying 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this! Truly inspiring (i.think.that.i.will.write.a.poem!) and I love the way it's just so fragmented without really being broken up at all. Ake sense? I hope so. There's so mcu I want to say about this poem (it.fills.me.with.feelings.) but I'm speachless! |