hey, awesome start of a stoy. I really enjoyed it. The title was iffy, but when I began to read it, I totally loved it. Hope you update soon!
I think Keita would look even more adorable without his glasses...^_~

I like the story, I like the concept. but some of the sentences didn't make a lot of sense, it was sometimes hard to follow. Also, there are issues with changes in tense. I'd reccomend having someone you know read over this and make corrections...

This is entertaining, I like it. I hope you plan to continue it soon.

Well, I hope you continue! Great story!

Nice story please update soon.

LOL this is freaking hilarious! Please write more! You haven't updated in like 6 months now T_T;

LMAO! THIS WAS HILAIRIOUS! LOVE IT! ALEC HAS SUCH A CHARACTER AND "SMALL FRY" (FANTASTIC!! ^^) IS SUCH A GEEK! I really enjoyed reading this and I know there is a lot to build up to but when are they going to "get married" and all that? Hope it's soon. Anyways, later! ^^

Derek x x x

oh Amen! you came back!

YAY! You finally updated! I though you discontinued it or something...Oh well thanks for the update!

this is hilarious!

another funny and delightful chapter...can't wait for more revelation in the story ;)

oh god XD that musing on how "daddy mcGarrett" is going to "pay" was hilarious!! I was expecting bloodshed (and plenty of it), but your literal take on "pay" was like, omg--I loved it!! what the heck, I'm declaring myself totally in love with this fic =Pyou sprained your hand? tough luck--here's to hoping you're all better now and ready to roll out more chapters *grin*

LMAO! I had to laugh along with this, man, that made me giggle a lot. Alec and Keita are so opposite...and exactly HOW do they end up togther? (if indeed they do)...well, we will wait and see, eh? It should be really interesting, WHEN'S THE WEDDING!!?? I can't wait for that, it's gonna be totally hilarious!

Great story, I can't wait to see where this goes...another great chapter and I thouroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done.

(salutes) Derek x x x

lol yet another great chapter =Pwhat WILL the result be? lol.. expulsion from the house? Or strict orders straightaway?

b-r-i-l-l-i-a-n-t work.