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Reviews For: broken heart disease

e a t i n g . f l o w e r s
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abusewow...very vividi loved the "Remove this broken heartSo I can’t feel anything."i totally know how it is to want that feeling. awesome job!
simpleplan13
2006-06-10
ch 1,
abusei like this... its a common concept, but you expressed it well and powerfully.. I love the part about death.. great job
Bonfire Of The Sanities
2006-05-26
ch 1,
abuseVery cool...something most people can relate to...very good metaphor useage...very nicely done!
My Ruin
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abuseI love it! I know what it feels like to have my heart completely shattered. My favorite lines were,

"And the pain’s getting worseIntensifying to fullAnd death’s calling my nameWith his hypnotic pullAnd he’s luring me in with visions of you"
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