|Reviews for Paper Cuts|
| Iris Early 7/13/06 . chapter 1
This has a wonderfully fast pace. The.. font changey things... what are they called? anyway, they're subtle and I love it. The fewer number of syllables in the last line emphasise the ending well. You're very good.
| poetic abortion 7/6/06 . chapter 1
You mix-mesh bold and italics with a eloquence all your own; it is so lovely to read.
Gorgeous, simply, gorgeous.
| classic violet 7/5/06 . chapter 1
Pretty. Oh so very very pretty. This poem is too pretty and beautiful and amazing.
| citrus scented 6/2/06 . chapter 1
wow, fast paced, brutal, intense, and burning burning burning. scorching. tightly and quality written. love it.
| Singing After Dark 5/28/06 . chapter 1
pure beauty in verse. my favorite lines are "indiscretion personified and very (very) pure/like what you wish you were before" your rhyme is gentle and doesn't have to be forced. i like that it only sometimes rhymes.
| burning in effigy 5/27/06 . chapter 1
Interesting format; loved the ending
very nicely written poem
| Captive Spirit 5/25/06 . chapter 1
Very unique and interesting I should say, I love your word choice and especially my favorite is the last line. Once again, this is a very unique poetry writing style. I like it.
- Captive Spirit
| Alena D'Etoiles 5/24/06 . chapter 1
cool...i luved it.