|Reviews for A Hundred Miles|
| JamieBell 6/13/09 . chapter 1
That made me happy! :)
| winnie 10/30/08 . chapter 1
ah! i remember when you wrote this. It made me happy. ) It still does. ) Running. D
| MK 7/13/08 . chapter 1
First things first, Wow, what a brilliant way to ask someone to prom? I actually had to stop reading for a second to take in exactly how awesome it was! I mean same model and size shoes? and leaving that note? Incredible. I wish I had thought of it :P
I loved how you avoided naming either character, and gave relatively short physical descriptions of the characters. Something I like about stories like this is the ability to imagine anyone in the character's positions. Often times too much physical description ruins that. As a result I was greatly drawn in to the story!
So, review in a word: Brilliant!
| firemounrain 12/17/06 . chapter 1
"August third, she moved into the new house. It was a cute two-story that didn’t particularly stand out in the neighborhood, a cozy area with trees, flowers, and children playing outside even in the summer heat. Her window opened into the backyard, which the previous owner had landscaped liberally, but with taste. She threw open the panes and screen and breathed deeply the heady aroma of late summer flowers. She liked the house." Show, don't tell. Use little details to sketch the full effect.
As to the rest of it (i.e. the note in the shoes, cet) AGH, CUTE!
| kt strikes again 9/23/06 . chapter 1
I've read it again, and i still love it! Now, where's the next story?
| kt 9/22/06 . chapter 1
that was so cute! i loved it, and i'm gonna read it again!
| LouisaNord 5/24/06 . chapter 1
I like your plot/ premise. Do you have plans to flesh this out with details to create a novel? Just curious...I like it as a short story as well.
| Just Jenita 5/24/06 . chapter 1
Yay! You posted it. Well, seeing as you already know what I think... *shrug*