Ah hah! Fictionpress has decided to like me again! It's letting me review. Anyways, I LOVED this poem. It's amazing and so powerful and so meaningful in a way to me and the kinds of things I write. I loved it. ~Rowan~

fucking powerful and raw, somehow even beautiful. fragmented, but that makes it real and amazing. god knows i've felt like this so many times. i've always wanted to punch a mirror ... it would be comforting to watch myself shatter.

This is great. Just great. People don't write like this enough anymore.

i relate to this one a lot too. nice job.

and yes i realize that most of my reviews are the same lol

Excellent. The visualization and repetiveness of the word 'blood' brings a sharp sense of revelation and pain to the entire piece, as well as bringing the attention to center around the previously stated elements. There's also a sense of anger which highlights the pain and really helps the reader to conjoin to the words. Whoa...I've really got to get out more cuz that review scares me...btw, thank you for reviewing my Court, aka Hi Anata No Nikumu. She's going through a tough time.

Loved the ending... sort of like everything is a bit scrambled, and nothing is really clear, and that things are happening too fast. :)

the imagery is so intensifying, it really can break a girl down. good work.

-trinity

Very dramatically portrayed. The words you choose are exotic and bold and the images put forward, effective. Keep writing!

-Gracelin

Very good! I like the way this is written. Very deep and emotional.

Nice...(that's all I can think to say)