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| miss-blackhair 2007-11-29 ch 1,  | abusewhoa. i knew how that felt. i like the way you play around with the words. the piece is short but somehow it managed to put something real through you. |
| Darkness Eraser 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThis work was dark- and I like that. I'd like to see another, longer poem, perhaps, similar to this one. No, I'm not encouraging depression. I just think this poem could convey even more emotion if expanded. Nice work, though; I look forward to more from you. |
| Victor Joseph 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseim always sorry to read depressed poetry, because i wonder what happened to inspire it. |
| Angevin 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved the feeling of that. Very dark. Great. |
| alice is dying 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this! Nice use of repitition. |