What a wonderfully terrible poem.

I loved the "Blood in, Blood out" parts, as they seemed a very good repetition to use. One of the best.

This piece conveyed the coldness and almost /fear/ of this person, this person with no emotions.

dont we all wish that sometimes.. ncie repition

Interesting perspective. It sounds completely rational but has very bitter tones. Very good poem. It makes the reader stop and think.

well..that was very interesting.very true and you made your point. I don't think I've ever read anything like it...but good job all the same.

very intereting. i like it. it's a little random, but as they say, "a little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men." it's a good principle to live by. nice work.