That's awesome. I like the whole leg getting eaten thing. I had a dream recently that my foot was eaten by a tiger, but then I looked down and it was there but just covered in scabs. It was odd. Oh and the names and the hair. They're well good! What's happening with moonlight? Oh yeah and Murdere. I'm not sure if I should carry on. Am lost for inspiration. But I will try! Erm that was long.. bye

Cool. Keep it up!

Wow, this is very strange, lol. Interesting, though. You use description well, too. I have a pretty clear visual of what the characters look like. Keep writing! :)

Hey, cool idea for a story. I know I have some pretty strange dreams, and I can always remember what I dream, so I end up thinking about the dream throughout the entire day. It's very distracting, lol. I'm definitely interested in where this will end up. Keep writing! :)

this is going great! i love it! i hope to see more up soon. =)

Hey, no fair, you can't leave it at a cliffy!

um i dont like it

you just have to continue!

oh no! he's going into the woods. -hehe- i like it! very nice plot so dar. i hope to read more! there is more right? i hope so, it is going great. i like this type of story. the only thing that i saw wrong was that there were a few spots where you would run your words together. that tis all. i love this!-thanks for the review. yeah, people ditch me all the time, wish i could kill them, but i really can't. the song was more about everyone that has ever left me -and all the people that seem to be leaving-, than just one person, so it would be pretty hard to kill them all.- =)