this is good...i believe in god sometimes but then other times i think if hes really here then why is there so much bad ** in this world? like why do some ppl have to suffer so much? ya know? but then other times theres those miracles and stuff and yeah..

This is wonderfully written d:)

very well written. you got the point across pretty well in this one to say the least . good job pal..



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For someone who was just "inspired" to write something they probably didn't have much of a view for, you did really well! Considering the subject matter of course. It sounds really bitter, just like a sinner's heart would be imagined. It is rather cliche though and something that's written about a lot in the same way, using the same examples. Taking atheism in some sort of different direction would've made it more interesting.

Ah. I can feel the self doubt in God. great poem!

~Autumn~

m... I can see how someone would feel this way. But we are all sinneres and have fallen short of the glory of God.

Awesome write but I don't believe this way. God does exist! Ya know, I often wonder why people believe there is a wind. I mean they can't see it, so how can it exist? Aww...but one can surely feel it. I feel it too...

Very nicely and thoughfully written. Although I don't exactly agree with this poem, it's still very interesting to read and I can relate to how sometimes God "seems" like he's not there since he's not answering your calls. ...Or something like that. Hehe. Awesome job. Keep writing! :)

hmm. yes god is a problem at times but its harsh to say he doesn't exist... you never know. all in all i thought that this was a good poem... keep writing

I am a christian too, and I totaly understand how you would feel to write this. Everwhere I glance I see a new face mocking me, and new questions that I fear to answer for further mockery. I like this, it almost puts things into perspective for us to see how the world thinks. I like this, it was good, and i don't agree with it either. :)

You are a Christian as am I, but I still liked this poem. It's true. When someone sins, and are not repented, they look for God and cannot find him. To a sinner, a civilization may well seem to be falling down around them. Good job.