it's very pretty, i love the atmosphere set up throughout the whole thing, and the butterflies part too...oddly enough im actually seeingmore butterflies around lately than usual, i wonder if it's just because theyre about to die out cause theyve lost the last of their homes or if theyre making a come back, anywayz, excellent imagery, very pretty warm sad but not, muchly enjoyable

absolutely gorgeous, if i could write good reviews i promise it would say something like 'i love this'

-naomi

that second stanza.

i love it.

HORRAY! This proved to me that soppy writing with plenty of love and cutting isn't taking over the world...unfortunately, I contribute to the soppy stuff. Anyway, I loved the meaning hidden behind this. Nice word choice. Even though the formatting could have been (in my opinion) a little better, it doesn't take away from the overall splendour of the piece. Great work!