That reminds of people our age ya know? That is a very true poem about how some people look at the world...i liked how you wrote it, very creative, i liked it!

I enjoy reading your poems. Keep it up!

WiNkS

There are a lot of cliches in this poem. While it's true that it's hard to write things that are original, you may want to broaden your horizons and read more for inspiration...I look forward to seeing more of your work.