Tragic! But well done :)

I'm hoping your sister's wedding wasn't like that..

very vividly described. like the way u wrote it tho. it also reminds me of the way one of my friends use to write his poetry. keep writing! once again, very good poem! ^-^

Very unexpected. Pleasantly creept with awesome imagery. Nicely written. . . and, of course, I like darker/sardonic/cynical poetry, especially well-written poetry, like this. Write up my alley and pleasing as usual. Yay for updates!

thats awesome! I like how you get the point accross in so few words.