Hope this was just a poem. You describe the past-hopeless- feeling well.

amazing! emotionally strong and expressive - you can hear the pain in the words. it really touched me as i know how it feels and felt like i understood. good job.

Wow that's deep. When people stick their nose up to me I call them piggy. It's just my way of dealing with it. This one girl did that to me when I wore all black on halloween and I followed her all around the school going oink oink, she was so embarressed, she was a year younger then me but now she knows I don't put up with a lot of things. Her friends hate me though, can't help but smile at that :D.

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Oh my god, you have a gift for poetry. It's really deep but also real. It was really good...

It creates very good pictures and has strong emotions. Strong ending, too. Nice work. TheCryingGame