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Foreverswimming
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseEveryone does seem to think that if you smile you are a happy go lucky person, but they never seem to go deeper into what is hiding behind that smile. They just see a smile and smile back thinking what a sweet person. The next day they find out that they're dead by suicide. I see smiles and I ask what is the cause. I don't just think what a pretty smile (yeah if the guy is hot I will think that). People also think money and power gives you happiness, they can't seem to learn that it's the friends you have. Great poem by the way!

Ruler of the Freakin' World

~foreverswimming
elisefey
2006-07-21
ch 1,
abuseOh. I like this.
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