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Reviews For: A ten minute play
deepdown 2006-09-02 . chapter 1
made me laugh :) good recurring jokes, and good characterisation. plus i know people like those characters, so...
wheresthespacekey 2006-05-30 . chapter 1
a bit choppy for a play. '**' was nicely used to portray tom's character, but there are other ways to do that. it felt as if '**' was used a bit often.

besides that, i actually really liked it. very appropriate, for the characters were well rounded and there weren't too many of them. i loved the content of the dialogue - the cactus/cacti was great, i laughed out loud.
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