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| Valentina 2006-06-02 ch 1,  | Awesome poem. Nice to see you're not letting some *unfortunate* experiences bring you down, and hopefully she'll see what you mean with this. |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-05-25 ch 1,  | Poor girl. I agree with the line that that is pathetic. Sorry reall didn't see what the angsty part of the poem was. Good JOB! |
| shooting stars and secrets 2006-05-25 ch 1, | interesting and very well written. I like how you make some phrases more important. This is really good, and somewhat deep. p.s. I added you to my favorites - willow |