"Concrete meets boneAnd lights fade awayThe blood drainsAnd trails down the ground…"

My favorite part. Oh-so-morbid. I loved the ending too. I hate those clocks.

Sorry about last night btw. I have a bad cold and it's making me the bitchiest person alive. Gomen ne! ^.^;;

love xoxo

LOL, who can't relate to this? Very creative way of putting that feeling. By the way, I love your penname. ;-) Nice job.

you sound like you've got some... issues... to work out... :/

but i liked it!