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Reviews For: Beyond Your Eyelids
Runic Binary 2006-10-11 . chapter 1
Oh my god. I actually wondered what the world looked like with my eyes closed when I was little. That's just bizarre.

This is an awesome interpretation of such, by the way. I loved how you had all the backstory, and the conclusion was just a blip. I don't think it would've been as effective if you'd described what Conner saw.
tentacle 2006-08-27 . chapter 1
reminds me of a clockwork orange for some reason.
Rampage33 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
Well I'm not sure if I understand your story completely, but it was pretty well written. You should describe a little bit more though to help put your readers inside the story more. Other then that it was pretty good.
writergurlLW 2006-05-25 . chapter 1
can that actually happen? that was ao short of a story though. kind of like a flash story.
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