This one's amazing. Really. Totally approachable, beautiful language. One of my favorites.

Ooh .. this strikes a chord somewhere in my mind .. It's hauntingly familiar, somehow. Almost like this is someone I've sorta-annoyed in the waiting room ..

Still, it's art. Yay for freedom of expression. Yay for our first amendment rights!

all my love,peter

Your word selection is, again, wonderful. The way you exclude certain words to create a sort of choppy-poetic flow really brings out your style, which I like. Another great one.

Almost decent, although a lack of music (rendering this near prose, and sonically ugly regardless), a gross amount of bad line breaks (almost every line), grammatical errors, & cliches (the most grievous being her sitting watching the light, wondering about the weather, the occupied chair metaphor) drag this down to a bad poem. Fix this.

it's interesting how similar your style is to faithless juliet. your diction is beautiful, per usual. nice work.

a waiting room poetically put. you know, i just realized as much in denial as i am, i dont like going to the doctors.

but i am a pessimist and apt to like bad news.

i feel strange, but i really like this. something so realistic that i can actually see it.

I am particularly fond of "And she's partial to the moon, yet I don't know this, in her purple fingernail world, I am just an occupied chair". The entire poem felt like a story, but one that flowed like a river, but never bumpy. I felt as if I was there watching her. Wonderful work.

I picture a doctors office waiting women is glamours and wearing lots of make-up. good imagery. and I like the potrail of how impersonal people are. specially in such a setting.