Wow, this is really good. You seldom read of Christian or Biblical stories on Fictionpress. It's so full of detail. Keep up the good work and please update soon! :-)

Eh, it's a decent begining. It's somewhat disjointed, but by the end I got an idea of what was going on. The only issue I have with it is Rahab's age: "only thirty" wouldn't exist in ancient societies. Thirty would be considered a feat of nature, and no longer young, considering most people died in their thirties. If you want her to be relatively old, I would say make her twenty instead.

A very interesting story and well written! update soon!

I like your story and have read the tale of Rahab in the Bible. Thank you and please update.

Marvelous! Now I'm sad to say that I didn't notice that you updated before now. You did a great job!

A very interesting take on the story. So far it sounds interesting and well-written!:)

Now I'm normally not a big fan of biblical tales, but I must say that this is fantastic! I sincerely hope you update soon, E.

Hey, I don't blame you for taking a little artistic license to change a couple of things. The Bible's a little screwy with the dates anyway. I actually went to thebricktestament.com and got myself familiar with this. Anyway, this chapter was nicely-written and polished as usual. Rahab's fear and sort of...lack of confidence here in the chapter is interesting and comes out as a little character flaw to balance out her independence later in her life. *faery tragedy

This gets more interesting. I wans't aware of the time gap. I don't see anything I need to pick apart (hurray!). I hope you update soon. Keep up the splendid work.- Sarika

P.S. I don't usually advertise, but I've got a Biblical-ish story too, if you are interested. It's called "Serpent Tongue".

Hello! I had a vague of idea of where you might be going- I just was curious as to how you would get wherever that was. Anyhoo, I liked this chapter. I like how you've described the time in your writing- like the descriptions of Rahab's life in Jericho. The dialogue is also believable, which is sometimes hard to do in these sorts of stories. Thanks for the note, too, by the way. Have a nice day!- Sarika

This is constructed very well. I like how you pay attention to detail and try to make it seem as period-esque as possible. Books are the next best thing to time machines, right? I like Rahab so far; she seems very self-sufficient and confident. I can't stand those waifish female protagonists. I don't know much about this Bible story, but I'm interested to read more. *faery tragedy

Rahab seems like an interesting character... I'm just a little puzzled as to where you're going with this. I think this was well written, save for a few teeny parts of dialogue that felt too modern for me (then again, I'm just picky!). I love Biblical-esque stories so I shall read more when I have the time... Happy writing!- Sarika

i really like it! update soon!