this is interesting, and seen as how you have already stated that the poems have not really happened to you, i can take a deep breath. it is so very sad, and true. poeple take for granted that they have so much, and one day, it could be gone, left there, on the street, w/ nothing. this is the truth and people just don't understand. i love the point of this poem, as well as the poem structure and the flow of your words. very good! -thank you so very much for the review. yes, in the last line it should be my, but i also talk using me instead, so tha's just how it came out. =)- love ur work! =))

Nice work, and I really like the concept. We all think we're so invincible...