Powerful. Very powerful. It makes one thing about things are not always what they seem, and how we cannot always see what it is there. I enjoyed reading this story. I did notice a few punctuation errors here and there, but they are minor. If you'd like to know where send me a PM if you can. Right now my mind's in lala land. And it's due to your powerful story. ^_^

Excellent story. I don't know what it is about your writing, but I'm totally in love with it. I admit, I had completely forgotten to read Sword but I shall correct that mistake on the morrow. The curse of my ever errant mind.