 Simplycity 2006-05-27 . chapter 1Wow. The whole thing about the wind rushing past her ear was pretty. I also liked the "she’d freeze and wake up a thousand years into the future." Not quite sure why, but it sure sounded pretty.
I would have never expected that... ending? Is this going to continue?/anyways. When you said I gave you a sort of inspiration, I imagined the guy in the room to be some creep or killer who snuck in and stuff. Ack; real life. Nice chapter/story. |