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Reviews For: Invisible Boundaries
Shion S. 2009-07-17 . chapter 1
This was good, but I feel like it kind of cut off too abruptly.
It was still amazing, and the words were well put-together.

(This is 4n71m0nyl4yn3, by the way. :) )
Chiclets 2006-10-19 . chapter 1
:) I like this. I think I should come back and read more of your stuff sometimes. You seem to be quite a good writer.
Simplycity 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
Wow. The whole thing about the wind rushing past her ear was pretty. I also liked the "she’d freeze and wake up a thousand years into the future." Not quite sure why, but it sure sounded pretty.

I would have never expected that... ending? Is this going to continue?/anyways. When you said I gave you a sort of inspiration, I imagined the guy in the room to be some creep or killer who snuck in and stuff. Ack; real life. Nice chapter/story.
thispagedoesn'texistanymore. 2006-05-26 . chapter 1
that's awesome! i like this ones story line.
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