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Sunset Teardrops 2006-05-26 . chapter 1
Great poem. The words are effective and well-chosen enough to bring out the mixed feelings of the persona. It's beautiful since the last line really sticks out and sums up the whole thing. And it's nice to know that people can do/feel two very opposite things at the same time.

See ya around, pare. Paalam.
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