Funny enough I happened to like this piece.
Don't know why really but...it works :)

Very cute. Nietzsche would be so proud.

Good random stuff you write.

I'm so glad you didn't let down your one-shots.

Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress - Therese

that was awesome! i loved it. i know it was very cliche' romantic comedy wise (nd i konw u know it too), but i loved it due to its uniqueness with the toilet graffiti. i mean, its not impossible for someone to fall in love over some toilet graffiti, is it? nywas, i loved it. good job, that was great.

Oh, hahah, this is just freakishly brilliant. I grinned so wide at the end. It had the most perfect mix of humorous thought and moments of "your being stupid". Thank you, very much, for the marvelous time I had reading this.

I think it was lovely. The last line really clinched it all...and I absolutely love the characters.

This was hilarious...unbelievable. The ending, that is. :)

The summary and the title worked as an effective hook, and the pen-throwing part was hilarious. Yes, it did come off as a little stilted in the beginning, but that's just because the word-choice was moving towards formal when the entire tone and concept was more quirky and informal.

Ooh, I love street artists, and yes, I've seen too many Nietzsche rip-offs in the form of "God is dead." (Once, in Potsdam, I even saw "Is Hip-hop Dead?" O.o Very deep, that one, I'm sure.) Her response though, was brilliant. And HE! by the sacred name of Hashish, he definitely knows how to play hardball.

Once you start describing the mystery artist as tall, dark and brooding, of course it's easy to guess he'd be the exact opposite. While I definitely like what he turned up to be ("I really thought you were going to be Swedish" anyone?) but he didn't literally have to be the physical opposite of what she was imagining, did he?

Overall, the concept is rather familiar, but the execution is a plus.

Hahahaha! Favorite. I would love to have a conversation with someone on a toilet cubicle wall!

Come on, it's real funny! Very good, give yourself a round of applause.

Heheh. I'm glad it ended the way it did.

This was awesome, original, and cleverly ended. Five stars! :D

Wow, haha, that made me smile. That's quite a way to meet your soul-mate. And aww, just oh so believable and quirky and sweet. If nothing, the chat will be quite interesting for both. Kuddos for being original!

I loved this! It was quite hilarious- especially Charlotte! =D

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Hahaha, this is interesting! :D I like it. Unique one-shot.