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| sueb262 2006-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseWhat beautiful imagery here! The very feel of the dew on the rose, and the tenderness of the petals, the smell of the morning--such a beautiful, strong, "yes!" picture. This is the sort of verse that should be printed against a lovely background, framed, and hung on the wall. |