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Warg 2006-08-09 . chapter 1
Haha..

I loved the summary too, and the poem follows it up with its simple natural flow.

Very easy to come to terms with this, following it through is quite another matter :p

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Femme de Dieu 2006-06-06 . chapter 1
I love the simple yet powerful message in this haiku. Which is exactly what haiku is supposed to do. haha

I have to say as a side note, I really enjoy your author's notes as well as your extended summaries, or are they snippets of journaling that you put up in your profile area. It really adds to the work. So many people grump about the summary lines (even I have done so at times)-- but really, it does tend to provide just a bit more insight to the piece.

But to be human is to complain.,,=)
x.Insanely Serene.x 2006-05-26 . chapter 1
Ow! i loved it!! it was great advise and a awesome poem!! keep it up!

Love ya lots, Serenity
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