As I read this I made up a melody to the words, and now I can't get it out of my head. This poem/ song lyrics is so truthful it hurts. Magnificent, love it.

- Sarah :-)

oh, sweetie this is so sad, and so good, i've felt that way before, you are such a great writer, never stop writing your feelings, you get better every time i read you work!! as always thank you for sharing

I really like this. So many girls feel this way but not many of them could put it into a song as pretty as this. I commend you!

this would be some really cool song.i like it.