Aw. That's really sad. It's like those girls that just look like they've got it all together when they are really on the verge of a breakdown. Really nice job. P.S. I really love the last line in your profile: "i am normal, i just do it with style." OMG. I love it. Great job!

It annoys me that some girls are like that, I think it is one of the most dreadful things to grow up clueless.

Well portrayed

Alan

So pretty- I think I might die of admiration. "So tragic, dear, and oh so pretty." Simply lovely.

Monday

Stunning and enthralling. I run out of adjectives... But it really was good. Dark. But great. Like Christy said, the rhymes are perfectly unique, and that gives it an air of superiority. Some interesting points too, I like how your poems have something that made them, rather than just being for the sake of it. Keep going (as always).

Darkly beautiful.

"She’s the girl the world should pity

So tragic, dear, and oh so pretty."

I think the ending is my favourite, great job.

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YAY! finally someone can make a poem rhyme without using the same boring old rhymes that everyone uses!LOVIT!is it about you?

This is very deep & dark, but it is also beautiful! Pretty indeed!

WINKS!