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Reviews For: Summer Evening on the Climbing Frame
Lisa Parry 2006-05-31 . chapter 1
A gorgeous scenic description that captured the esscence and lazy atmosphere to the summer. I quite liked the way the description wasn't too heavy, like when the narrator says 'A delicate breeze ripples my chestnut hair,/ Then it weaves gently away, quiet as a whisper'. :)
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