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Rose 2008-03-19 ch 14, anon.	abuseBeautiful and stunning. I loved everyword.
eurtreve 2007-09-22 ch 14,	abuseI just read that straight through, and I love the ending. Everything ended up fitting together perfectly, but you didn't package it like everyone was perfectly okay and they lived happily ever after, you made it so that they could work through their issues together and grow in time, which was quite realistic and happy in its own way. Anyway, good job, and I don't know why you don't have more reviews on this -haley
SereneSorceress 2007-06-30 ch 6,	abuseExcellent!
SereneSorceress 2007-06-22 ch 4,	abuseI love it!
Candiferous 2007-05-25 ch 14,	abuseI just read your entire story straight through. It only took me about three hours, but it was certainly worth it. At first, it was hard for me to get into the story. Some writing devices bothered me. Parts of it stuck out to me. But you wove it all together magnificently. You left nothing unsaid, you did not overwork a thing. I think it all turned out perfectly, and I think you're a lovely writer. (: With a little editing, I could see this or anything written by you on the shelf of a bookstore.
Michelle 2007-02-02 ch 14, anon.	abuseThis was so good to see how the process works, I think that there are a lot of people can learn from this and see a ligt to guide them. I know that it helped me. Thanx
Right or Ryn 2007-01-28 ch 5,	abuseThis could possibly be the most underrated story on Fictionpress. Your writing is impeccable. Well not really, cause nothing's perfect, but yours is so close its scary.
SereneSorceress 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseGreat Story!
Celebros 2006-12-23 ch 14,	abuseYAY CLOSURE! My computer's been whacko for the past few weeks, hence its taken forever to review. I loved the ending, it did the story justice. I eagerly await more from you, and happy writing!
Darklight Shadow 2006-12-17 ch 14,	abuseI'm so glad that they are finally together again! That's so great! Lara finally patched things up with Paige and that part was very sweet! But I still liked the last part more! Anyway, are you going to have a sequel?? That'd be so great! :-) Anyway, when are you going to update your fanfic story again?? I'm getting impatient hint hint!!
DeLayNee 2006-12-17 ch 14,	abuseOMG! Absolutely amazing ending!! Sorry I didn't review the last one, for some reason the update just didn't reach my mailbow, I guess... ANYway, I loved the way you dealt with Kabran, where she told him everything, and then how he reacted... just amazing. Astounding... I really need more adjectives. On another note, what is your username? And if I've asked this before please pardon me, I have a horrendous memory.
Darklight Shadow 2006-11-11 ch 13,	abuseWell if you don't want the end to be a let-down.. then get Marc and Lara together again and end it with the usual happily-ever-after that always brought smiles on the readers lips! Anyway.. I was shocked to discover that this story is coming to an end!! But I'm really glad that Kabran's gone.. just too bad about Marc.. he couldn't have left Lara forever!! He has to return to brighten her day and the readers' and maybe even yours!! :P Anyway.. Please don't kill the thing Lara and Marc have (or had since I don't know where the hell is Marc..) between them... Anyway.. I'll always be waiting eagerly for your next story in fictionpress and fanfiction!! :D
rhithedwarf 2006-11-10 ch 13,	abuseI loved this chapter. It was very...deep. I know, I leave crummy reviews. But I figured you might like knowing you had another reader. ^^ As far as anything not making sense, or any holes in the story...I know of none. I think you have done a wonderful job on this.
Celebros 2006-11-10 ch 13,	abuseI liked everything except the fact that Marc just left. I was waiting for some closure there, but it never happened. And I was wondering what happened with Lara after Kabran finally left. She still has alot to deal with, even subtracting sadistic psycho ghostie. But all in all, it was a great story. Keep up the good work!
Darklight Shadow 2006-10-31 ch 12,	abuseOh my god!! This story is so intoxicating!! I love it to bits!! It's going into my Favorite Stories list and you are going into my Favorite Authors list!! I couldn't stop reading this story even though my mum keeps nagging me and I have school the next day!! So good!! Marc rocks!! I hope they find someway to get rid of Kabran soon because he's getting on my nerves!!

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