Utterly beautiful.

An awesome story, and really touching... Also thinking about Karban gives me the creeps and him trying to kill Marc through Lara's hand was totally disturbing. Death, guilt and violence are rather grave subjects to deal with yet you pull it off nicely. Marc was really cute and Lara a nice character too, they definitely belonged with each other. A thoroughly great read, thanks. :-)

wow! you are one heck of a writer! I loved this story and the plot. It was great!

Keep up the awesome writing!

-Alex

Oh, interesting!

Very good foreshadowing, and it gives the reader (or at least this reader) ideas, gets them thinking about what in the world it could all possibly mean.

Great last sentence! The whole ending, really.

I'm quite excited to find out who the mysterious dark-haired man is.

One: The Angel Of Death

Two: The devil

Three: A dead Person

Four: Her own subconcious (unlikely, since its a supernatural fic.)

Well, I'll be reading more!

Good work, keep writing please

Very nice!

The language and comparisans you used made my skin crawl (in a good way, of course) and you made Lara seem real.

Your writing and the way you present your character's and their emotions on a chopping board instead of a silver platter reminds me some of Sarah Dessen, only your work is... somehow, better.

If you wanted, I'm sure you could have this published.

Keep writing! .

THANK you very much

your story was so good

i had to read it all straight

ur a great writer,

im definately going to check any others of yours

thank you again

for making us readers lives fun :P

i just wanted to tell you that you wrote an amazing story! i read chapters 1-14 in one sitting! i couldn't stop:) you have an amazing talent and thanks for sharing it with us!

WOW.

Just, wow.

You really have no idea how 'wow' that was.

I was going to wait until I was finished reading this to review it, but I just couldn't wait. This story is incredible. It hits really close to home for me in some ways, and you've captured the emotions so perfectly. It feels real.

Sorry I wasn't on. I LOVE THIS STORY BUT I TOTALLY FORGOT THAT I HAD A ACCOUNT! DAMN HIGHSCHOOL ISSUES!

Beautiful and stunning. I loved everyword.

I just read that straight through, and I love the ending. Everything ended up fitting together perfectly, but you didn't package it like everyone was perfectly okay and they lived happily ever after, you made it so that they could work through their issues together and grow in time, which was quite realistic and happy in its own way. Anyway, good job, and I don't know why you don't have more reviews on this

-haley

Excellent!

I love it!