Very good story! ^_^ Do continue.

Wow, this story is really good. the man kind of reminds me of norman Bates, but I kind of like him.
He seems cute to me, but then again, I have "issues". I wonder what happened to him in order to make him not want a woman, but unemotional perfection.
I reminds me of Law and Order SVU. Really good, can't wait to read more.

Wow spooky. Man who's obssessed with dollys... Please continue!
Glory

Wow! That was an amazing story! It gave me the chills.
I loved it. Keep up your great work.

All together it was pretty good... I suggest that you make it more obvious in the begining that Dolly is brain-washed (or whatever you wanna call it)at first I felt that she hated the man... but then you come to find she doesn't

I loved this story! I absolutly adore dolls and creepy dudes and what a wonderful combination you have made of them! You have a great deal of talent and this was an awesome piece, I really liked the whole odd angle of it all. Bravo!

Disturbing. Are you planning on continuing this?