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| cbprice25 2008-05-27 ch 7,  | abuseHey! It's been a while. And you've got short chapters too (I think you should write more). In any case, I'm glad you're sticking with this. Good luck with future chapters! |
| justdance 2008-05-16 ch 7, | abusewait so she had slept with someone the week before? lol i love the situations you put her in LOL this story rocks :D please update soon your loyal reader, justdance |
| lover or hater 2008-05-07 ch 7, | abusehey i read your story and hopefully you will write more (but dont wait two years) =] |
| D-Mish 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abuseFunny story line, i really like it. Though i'm still not sure about the black bra thing? But tristian sounds nice ;) PS, Noah sounds like a totally appropriate name, just for me. Please update soon! :) |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-05-03 ch 7, | abusefinally u updated! can't wait for the nxt chapter! |
| Moonlit Promise 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! That'd be so awkward! Some spelling mistakes but not a big deal. |
| akaCHEEKS 2008-05-01 ch 5, | abusedude. this needs to be a movie. it would be so funny man. |
| OhSweetheart 2008-05-01 ch 7, | abuseI'm a new reader but this story is hilarious, keep updating please! |
| Birds and Boats 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseoh, i enjoyed that, noahs so possesive, what a cutie...i'm curious about what happened with the girl, how do you scream really loud doing anything other that sex? |
| fortuneismymuse 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseWait, is Gregory the one giving her the bra?? |
| Melissa 2008-04-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseI cannot tell you how glad I was to see this update. I absolutely love this story and the idea behind it, and I can't wait for more updates, hopefully a little faster than this one ;) And I'm dying to see some more Robyn/Noah interaction. |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abusehaha this is a funny story. UMM come on Noah what else could his lady friend be doing? hahah but yes si bet they didnt do it.. and Robyn just made an ** of herself. haha update soon! |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseHey! Yay! Two years later, but better late than never eh? lol Well it's glad to see you're back, I loved this chapter! It was hilarious, I especially love the ending! Update soon!! :D HC |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseOk, really good story so far! Its getting on really well and the characters are developing. I really liked Carla, shes a funny character goving the story a more human touch. Please, please, please update soon! ~Lillie |
| P 2008-04-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseYour story is very enjoyable to read. :D |