good job! its powerful i like. B

I don't think it was weird. I think the truth should be told more often. Remarkable message! Excellent write.

Wow...that was deep yet so true...i am a christain myself and i must say that that was a very dark poem about judgement day. Wow...that actually creeped me out a bit but it is true. I must say i will read other stories or poems that you intend to write.