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| magnusthewolf 2007-02-06 ch 1,   | very nice imagery here...i can see it myself :) nice poem, magnus |
| Plinky 2006-07-14 ch 1, | This is lovely - so soft and gentle. I love all of it. I couldn't pick out a favourite line or lines. It just works so well, it's lovely. Keep writing! |
| Striped Candycane 2006-05-27 ch 1, | I LOVED the discriptions. It creates very vivid images in the reader's mind. Excellent word choice. Great work! |
| Orion Demasecus 2006-05-27 ch 1, | Nice use of imagery. I also enjoy the transition used. ~Orion Demasecus |