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| Twilight Starr 2007-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| an-entraced-pyromaniac 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseok i dont want to know what he did but it sounds sick so i will leave it at that |
| KingdomRain 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abusea little twisted but its all good. in the first two lines it had something of a nice flow to it and the rest was just as good. all in all i thought it was good. |
| Der Patrizier 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseNuce expressions of feeling and nice usage of words you have here. I like your craftsmanship. Keep it up! |
| nadorj 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one the ryming is beautiful keep up the good work! |
| poemkitten7 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really cool! Awesome work! Although it is quite tragic, there's also something about it that makes it seem so pretty. But then again, I'm just strange... Keep writing. :) ~Sara |
| Princess-anna57 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, tragic and dramatic! It's really, really good! Excellent work! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |