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| MidnightxRainfall 2007-12-07 ch 1,  | abuseThat was just so brilliant! You have a way with poetry! Awesome job! |
| Ajax Elpis 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI am very impressed. I haven't read any poetry for a long time with a religous meaning behind it, that actualy sounded original. I have been reading christians writting with their head for a long time, and seeing one that feels genuine, is really refreshing. Keep it up. |
| ohthevoices 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagery and message. Keep it up! |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this is just so beutiful hopeful and sad. Thank you so much for posting this. Kira |
| perpetual questions 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseAnother truly lovely star themed poem. Keep up the great work! |
| Technical-Difficulties 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abusethat was awesomeness.it was kind of motivating. you know.. in a kinda sliver linig sort of way. usually i like my poems to ryhme and its glaringly obvious when writers dont ryhme but you words just seems to sift together so barely noticed. ;D good job |
| Qryous 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseReally nice =D |
| magnusthewolf 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed this lovely compile of emotions in vivid descriptions which you have here. nice job. the boldness adds to the poem quite nicely indeed. keep writing! :) magnus |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI could totally feel the emotion, it was like really amazing. My friend Ana (haha shes ana too. lool) and I were just discussing how awesome it is to write soemthign htat really moves ppl. i think you did that here! |
| Herizon 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is very inspiring. It makes me think of my late nights drowning in my own shitfilled despair. This cheered me up tonight. |
| Isabella22 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful! Good job! It's just descriptive! i love it all! |
| Beautifula 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, just so beautiful and simplistic and written so well and flows together... just wow. awesome stuff! by the way, thanks for your review! |
| my-reflection 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseHey, thanks for reviewing my pieces so quickly! I love this poem! I feel this way so often, and I so hardly ever see the up side when I get to feeling that way. I'm usually so optomistic, but not when I'm in that mood. Great job connecting with me in your writing. Isn't that what poetry is all about? I'm posting all of my old stuff, and then I'll start writing again, so keep coming back to review! I'll try to get to the rest of your pieces too. |
| Raleven 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseHI! (sorry, I'm a tad hyperish) I've read a bunch of your poems since you left me a review and they're really good! I'm hoping you'll stick around and become a frequent reviewer of mine...(if I ever get around to writing more...^_^;) Anyway! YEAH! I love your writing, it shows a lot of emotions and such, excellentness! I look forward to more! |
| Sadistikal 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully Amazing! I loved this poem! Excellent imagery! Thanx for reviewing! Keep Writing-Sadistikal |