I liked that, very nice. You're Antony's friend Natalie aren't you?

You seem cool. Unlike him.

awsome! cant w8 2 read more!hmm...sounds like my love life...anywho, u rally are obsessed with greg aint u.

oh god. we have french forth. oh **.

I offical hate Lee. He kind of reminds me of this guy my friend knew/did; I personally dubbed him Smallville, but that's a completely different topic now isn't it. Anyways! I like this a lot, probably better then all your others (besides the poem, I love the poem, but I'll review that separately, :) ). And yeah, I like this style of writing for this one better then the style of the first chapter as well. I also like the twist. So to sum this all of up so I won't have to bore you with my oh-so-boring and rather wordy rambling review, I really enjoyed reading it. It was fan-freaking-awesome (and yeah I know as someone mentioned before, the 'tastic' got lost somewhere). Are you planning on continuing it?

Oh and thanks for the review for 'The Woes to a Beginning'. Much apprecaited. I'll be working on it a little more tonight so hopefully I'll have the next chapter up soon.

Again great story. Hope to read more soon from you.

oh ** indeed. you can still screw him over, then run into the lakes of the lake distric. lots of moores, you'll be able to flee.

ooh. i cant believe she said that though..i was like wtf just wit hhim nonetheless love the sotyr

You made me hate the guy... when I felt like liking him, too, because of all the gushing the girl was doing. But you made me hate him, which is good for your part, because that makes you an effective story-teller. :)

woo! very good, well described and powerful...but don't diss my unwins! bloody godsend that place!

"To be frank, I was obsessed. Not so much that I would go around licking the mud off his wonderfully original trainers or collecting a stash of his used tissues"...and stop taking my damn ideas!

It lacked much detail, but it was very good. It was a good read, don't get me wrong. I'm not sure if it's a one-shot or you're going to turn it into a story. I'm somewhat slow with that sort of thing unless the author tells in the summary that it's a one-shot :) But anyway, keep up the good work.

CK

hey, hope u had fun in wales! plz tell me this didn't happen 2 u, ur my nat!! lol !! it woz good, feeling could've been described better tho. soz.Shiney SianeyX