Oh, I likey! :D I love almost all of your male characters! haha. There's going to be a party! someone's going to get drunk, and dance on a table top! ..maybe. XD It's awesome to see that you updated this one! See you next update! lol.

Wow, this is pretty interesting. I like it. I'll be waiting for more.

Okay, I am still at it. I applauded when he hit Mark. The scum so deserved it!! Eric is kind of cute, too, because he is so shy about her.

I do look forward to some of those explanations about the shaprshifters and all. Their grandfather sounds like an interesting old fellow indeed.

Oh, and Delio should have bloodied his nose.

Wouldn't it be a lot more fun to be able to change into anything?? From a regular guy from the street to a wilting sunflower in your grandma's garden and then to a CD rack containing your favorite CDs and to a little bug so you can spy on your crush!! *gasp* maybe even a microorganism!! Haha.. anyway.. great chapter!! I like the way you write this story!! :P

woo good and keep going :P

tis ok i will help *super rachel to teh rescue* when u need it :P lol

rachel

Wowie! Short chapter indeed! *pouts and puts hands on hips* I'm a little angry about that but methinks I will get over it!

Um, anyway, can you really mumble something and then have an exclamation mark at the end? Lol.

You put...

“You freak! I’ll do you for this!” he mumbled.

Hmm, that kind of confused me a little...BUT other than that! A great chapter you have here. I like!

I hope you update soon! And yes...you better update one of your other stories too...

(OMG...i thought i saw something crawling on the floor...jeez, thought it was a rat or something...I nearly had a heart attack! But it wasn't it was just my eyes playing tricks on me! Lol, that's how tired i am...I'M SEEING SHADOWS ON THE FLOOR...MOVING! dnt mind me i have major mental probs)

Anyway...Ciao!

i am onmy cousin's laptop and i yelled "yay!" when i had saw you updated and she looked at me like i was crazy. lol. turdlock is a nickname since my last name is tadlock. yep. lol. :D

yay i'm so so so happy that you updated!! i really like this one. the whole idea of the shapeshifters are cool. and Delio is a cutie! lol. i miss Lizzie and Deacon too! Deacon is my hot vampire prince who isn't a vampire... lol! I also like Eric! :D

great chapter! update any one of your stories SOON!! :D lol. oh yeah thank you for the reviews!

This is a starting for a really good story! Go along with it, continue it, its REALLY GOOD!

You know, this story could have some major kinky implecations . . . Oh well, at least their surname is not Cuxhaven!! Okay, I have been writing too much on that story of late. Oh, and I was down to two stories . . . I forgot "Death".

Anyway, this is a nicely written piece. I think I would have put the bit about the shapeshifters at the beginning of the chapter, and leave the last to paragraphs in place. It sets the story up better.

Still, it was a nice chapter altogether. And scumbag Mark! Oh, and guys really notice that busom thing! Delio probably noticed more than he is willing to admit!

wowo thats actualyl reli good...i havent got round to thingy yet./...blood doner but i will. anywho its good and dotn worry ull figure where u wana take it later. it isnt reli neccesasay yet until u have to liek after u get the whold charlotte thing over. btw some things remind me of me liek she rides a moterbike...lol and u haev to stay on the right side of her...lol

:P Rachel xx

Wow.. great chapter!! I like shapeshifter stories.. Really nice chapter!!

I like this! Why don't you like it! I mean this is really good! I hope you update this soon! It's a really good idea.

Cya!

Tasha -x-

it sounds really interesting. i would love to read it if you continued. good start!

pretty good. Delio has dark hair and dark eyes. hehe. do you just make me love you guy characters on purpose? lol. :D

but seriously i like it so far. sounds pretty good. :D if you want to continue it then that's cool and if you don't that's cool too. :D Mark is the name of Helena's uncle in my story. hehe.