Reviews for Mourning Dove - FictionPress.com

mylittlechangingtruths 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abusehmm. at first, i thought this was a bit over-dramatic.. but then i realized that you needed the cage. this probably isn't making a whole lotta sense, sorry! its a great poem, i think that the peacock is also a little mourning dove, under the fake beauty. still not making ny sense.. perhpas.. sorry.. awesome poem!!
happy heathen 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuseWow, what a pretty poem! I like the line about the peacock's tail being fake. I think it sends a powerful message. Keep writing!