I like the ending. Being Anna I can't help but read it in a sarcastic tone, although I'm not sure that's what was intended. Then again, knowing Brittany, it might just be.

ANYWAYSZ! Improvement is always and option [do I sound teacher(ish)?] But this is brilliant as it is.

Sorry for the PURE stupidity I might include in my reviews. I'm a little off myself at the moment. CHEERS!

ANNA

Amazing + a bazillion other adjectives i could use 2 describe it!! I love this piece, and i like the format of it.

Good Work here.

~Ellesmere~

btw, ive added this 2 my fav story list=)